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General Essay: Digital economy: A leveler or a source of economic inequality
Posted on 2019-07-06 19:18:34

Eswar
General Essay: Digital economy: A leveler or a source of economic inequality
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Digital economy: A leveler or a source of economic inequality.

Digital economy is an economy based on digital computing technologies using the internet. The digital economy is also known as Internet Economy.  It covers financial services, retail marketing, social, cultural etc doing online by an electronic device. Essentials of digital economy are Knowledge on using internet, availability of internet and mobile or PC.
It reduces transaction costs and transforms supply chains eg Zomato, Swiggy (food chain), Phone Pe, Google Pay(Banking Services), Trivago (Tourism), Red Bus (Travel). Further, it reaches the directly to beneficiaries in the case of welfare schemes. 

Currently, India's digital economy generates about $200 billion of economic value annually — 8 per cent of India's GVA in 2017–18 — largely from existing digital ecosystem comprising information technology and business process management (IT-BPM), digital communication services (including telecom), e-commerce, domestic. 

Illiterate people often faces problem in participating in Digital Economy whereas literates who have knowledge of using internet (APPS) saving their time, resources etc. 

The benefits of the digital economy for emerging economies like India are potentially large. ... Governments also benefit to deliver more and better public services, improve governance, evaluate policies etc.

Disadvantages of digital economy are loss of employment, heavy investment, menace of online theft etc.  User needs to be alert, conscious about online transaction etc otherwise he/she may loss financially devices hacking and caused to virus attack.

Digital economy reduces socio economic inequality through reaching direct transfers of Govt Services to common people, accessing to banking services, retail marketing etc 24 x 7 without discrimination.  It helps the economy of society and in overall development of nation but there is need of building awareness among users about safety and protection from cyber thefts by improving technologies.

K N Naresh Krishna
General Essay: Digital economy: A leveler or a source of economic inequality
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Author: Naresh Krishna

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General Essay: Digital economy: A leveler or a source of economic inequality
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Replay on 08-07-2019 03:29:55
1. Page 1: Introduction can be improved. Concept is fine but you can improve the structure.
1. Be formal (avoid +, use 'plus'. as in 7 billion plus)
2. At some places, sentences are not framed properly (eg: 'land, labour, capital..' sentence.)
3. Page 5: You wrote that Ramu is getting competition from Amazon, myntra etc. You should have written that his neighbour who is running a boutique is getting orders using facebook but he is not able to use technology to his advantage
4. Page 5: Be careful when you use small & capital letters ( , He can hardly..)
5. Page 6: you could have told that e-learning is not used by Ramu's son. He rather uses printed textbooks
6. Page 6: It should be - ASSOCHAM survey which was released last year told that 80%.. 
7. You could have talked about JAM trinity (Jan Dhan, Aadhar and Mobile) and Digital India
8. Your conclusion did not live up to the expectation. You wrote the essay very well raising the expectations of the reader but disappointed in the conclusion. In conclusion, you should have talked about Ravi and Ramu. It is like a climax in the movie. You have to bring all the characters appearing in the climax and also make it touching. You should make a lasting impact in the end.

Overall Impression - Very lucid and coherent. If you can make the suggested changes and also think about it and improve it. 

Rating: 3.5 STAR